Index

From Technical Style, by J. M. Haile, Macatea Productions, 2001.

Active voice, 32f, 36, 46, 59f, 65
Adjectives, 7f, 10, 16, 38, 80, 84, 86
. . . verbal, 5f
Adverbs, 7f, 38f, 80
Anadiplosis, 128
Anaphora, 128
Antecedents, 10, 43, 47, 63
. . . unclear, 48
Antithesis, 128
Argon, 137
Articles, 10, 13
Asterismos, 128
Asyndeton, 128

Beginnings, 37
Bestiary of figures of speech, 128
Bilateral tables, 123f, 135

Caesar's wife, 16
Chartjunk, 163f, 172
Clauses, (see also Phrases)
. . . nonrestrictive, 45, 77f
. . . placement, 11, 16, 46f
. . . punctuation of, 77f, 81f, 85
. . . restrictive, 45, 46, 77f
. . . subordinate, 19
Collective nouns, 13
Colon, 83f, 95
Column headings in tables, 122f, 126, 129, 130
Comma, 76f, 86, 94-96
Comparisons, 11f, 21, 57, 116, 158, 160f
Compound paragraphs, 56
Conflicts in number, 12f, 44
Cosines, law of, 100, 107
Critical temperatures, 126

Dash, 75, 85
. . . en, 96
. . . em, 96
Data, 8f, 13
Datum, 8
Dead-man plots, 148
Difference plots, 148f, 170
Dimensional consistency, 103f
Display of equations, 94f
Dot charts, 151f

Economy, iv, 1, 6, 9, 16, 23, 26, 29,
. . . . . . 34, 39, 49, 91, 101, 118, 127,
. . . . . . 131, 135, 171
Editing, 6, 23f, 41, 43, 45, 47f, 52,
. . . . . . 56, 64f, 69, 71f, 76, 79, 83,
. . . . . . 129, 135, 144, 177, 179, 182
Elements in earth's crust, 152
Elisions in equations, 96
Emphasis, 16, 25, 43, 48, 55, 57, 65, 70f, 140
. . . points of, 36f, 44f, 48, 52f, 84f
Energy densities of fuels, 140
Epistrophe, 128
Equation,
. . . as relating ideas, 91
. . . bounds and limits, 107f
. . . breaking long ones, 99
. . . dimensional consistency, 103f
. . . display of, 94f
. . . economical display, 101f
. . . elisions in, 96
. . . graphical interpretation, 116
. . . mathematical interpretation, 108f
. . . numbering, 95
. . . physical interpretation, 105
. . . punctuation of, 94
. . . spacing in, 98
. . . units of, 102, 103f
. . . variables in, 101f, 103, 105
. . . word, 106
Exclusive pair, 17
Exponential growth, 112f, 145f
Exponentials, 98

Figure,
. . . axes, 155
. . . caption, 153
. . . data, 156
Figure (con'd)
. . . design of, 160f
. . . grids, 157
. . . numbering, 153
. . . orientation and size, 154
. . . scales, 155f
. . . symbol key, 157
. . . unnecessary, 160
Figures of speech, 128
First drafts, 23f, 132, 144, 168
Fits to data, 157, 165, 167, 170
Flowmeter calibration, 132, 149f
Formula, 31, 90, 101
Fractions, 97

Golden mean, 154f
Graphs, see Plots or Figure

Harpsichord, 58
Hippogriff, 162f
Hydrides, 123
Hydrocarbon melting points, 174
Hyphen, 85

Imperative verbs, 19
Impersonal pronouns, 35f
Inclusive pair, 17
Introductions, 37f, 71
Introductory phrases, 46f, 65, 78f, 85
Items in series, 80

Jargon, 49
. . . computer, 98, 131
Least squares, 35, 146, 148, 165, 167, 169, 170
LEGOs, 66
Life expectancy, 125
Light, colors of, 111
Linear paragraphs, 61f
Linkage, 10f, 15, 29, 42, 43f, 49, 51f, 70f, 76, 82f
. . . sentence-to-sentence, 58
. . . sentence-to-theme, 52f
Log-log plots, 147, 167

Matrix tables, 125
Modifiers, 6f

Newton's,
. . . law of cooling, 113
. . . law of gravitation, 115
. . . second law, 93
Nitrogen, 135f
Nominalizations, 5
Nonnumeric tables, 127f
Nonrestrictive phrase, 45, 77
Notation, 91
. . . scientific, 98, 131
Nouns, 4f
. . . as adjectives, 7f
. . . collective, 13
. . . plurals without s, 8f, 13
. . . verbal, 5f

Ockham's razor, 158f
Opinion, 21, 36
Paragraphing, 69
Paragraphs, 51f
. . . compound, 56
. . . linear, 61f
. . . polyphonic, 57f
. . . procedural, 65f
. . . radial, 54f
. . . thematic, 52
Parallel structures, 16f, 24f, 40, 57
Partial derivative, 107
Passive voice, 32f, 36, 46f, 59f, 67
Personal pronouns, 34f
Phrases, (see also Clauses)
. . . introductory, 46f, 65, 78f, 85
. . . nonrestrictive, 45, 77
. . . placement, 11, 16, 46f
. . . prepositional, 6, 10f, 25, 34, 38, 42, 44
. . . restrictive, 45f, 77f
. . . wordy, 4, 19, 20, 26f
Piano, 58
Planets, 124
Pleonasm, 128
Plots,
. . . dead-man, 148
. . . difference, 148f, 170
. . . log-log, 147, 167
. . . semilog, 145, 147, 164f
. . . x-y, 144f
Polynomials, 148, 158, 159
Polyphonic paragraphs, 57f
Polyptoton, 128
Polysyndeton, 128
Population in U.S., 144f
Power law, 147f, 166f
Precision, 21f, 49, 156
Prepositional phrases, 6, 10f, 25, 34, 38, 42, 44
. . . Rule of Three, 11
Procedural paragraphs, 65f
Procedures, 18f, 38, 65
Pronouns, 10, 47, 63
. . . antecedent of, 10, 43, 47, 63
. . . impersonal, 35f
. . . personal, 34f
Pythagorean theorem, 95, 107, 109

Qualifiers, 6, 25
Quantum ladder, 68, 82

Radial paragraphs, 54f
Radioactive decay, 113
Rayleigh, Lord, 137f
Redundancies, 24, 102, 134
Repetition, 16, 19, 24, 57f, 72
Respectively, 39
Restrictive clauses, 45f, 77f
Reynolds number, 105f, 141
Rule of Three, 11
Rules,
. . . of grammar, 13, 29, 87, 90
. . . of style, 180f

Sailboat, speed of, 173
Scale factors,
. . . for figure axes, 155
. . . for table columns, 130
Scesis onomaton, 128
Scientific notation, 98, 131
Semicolon, 81f
Semilog plots, 145, 147, 164f
Sentence,
. . . beginnings, 37f, 40, 44, 62f, 126
. . . endings, 37f, 40, 44, 62, 126
. . . equation in, 95
. . . -to-sentence linkage, 58
. . . -to-theme linkage, 52
. . . transitional, 41
Signs,
. . . aggregation, 96
. . . operational, 96, 99
Slope, 145, 147, 158, 169, 172
Subordinate clauses, 19
Subscripts, 92-94, 98, 104
Summaries, 71
Superposition of waves, 116f
Superscripts, 92-94, 98
Symbolous confusious, 148
Symmetry, 103, 109f
Symmetry Principle, 110

Tables,
. . . bilateral, 123f
. . . column entries, 131
. . . column headings, 130
. . . design of, 131f
. . . editing of, 132f
. . . footnotes, 131
. . . headings, 130
. . . matrix, 125
. . . nonnumeric, 127f
Tables (con'd)
. . . numbering, 129
. . . separators, 129
. . . titles of, 129
. . . types of, 122
. . . unilateral, 122f
. . . units and scale factors in, 130f
Technical thesis, 37f
Terminal verbs, 54
Thematic paragraphs, 52f
Thermal pressure coefficient, 107
Thesis, structure of, 37f
Transitional sentences, 41
Trial and error, 48f, 86, 177
Triangle, area of, 114

Unilateral tables, 122

Van der Waals equation, 107f
Vapor pressure, 168f
Variables in equations, 101f, 103, 105, 109f
Verb close to subject, 15, 44
Verbal adjective, 5f
Verbal nouns, 5f
Verbless sentence, 16, 128
Verbs, 2f
. . . close to subject, 15, 44
. . . imperative, 19
. . . sentence without, 16, 128
. . . terminal, 34, 45
. . . weak, 2f, 6f, 22
Voice,
. . . active, 32f, 36, 46, 59f, 65
. . . passive, 32f, 36, 46f, 59f, 67

Water, 53, 59, 122, 141, 168
Weak verbs, 2f, 6f, 22
Wood,
. . . heating value of, 173
Word,
. . . equations, 106
. . . order, 43
. . . pairs, troublesome, 23
. . . unnecessary, 25
Wordy phrases, 4, 19, 20, 26f
Writing,
. . . as transformation, 176
. . . as transmission, 176
X-y plots, 144f
Zeugma, 128